Hello, I'm 16, I've been playing guitar for about a year and I decided to finally write a song. I wrote this song to a girl and ended up breaking up during the writing so it is not finished, but tell me what you think.


The sky looks so beautiful from here
It can't compare to the stars of last night
Lying there, with you by my side
nothing's wrong, everything's right

And we're two hours late
But I don't really mind
To the last second
You're worth all my time

Cause, Everyday with you is the 4th of July
And you're the fireworks exploding deep, deep inside
The thunderclap echoes to the beat of our hearts
Together tonight, this is only the start
And I promise you, with all of my heart
That together tonight, this is only the start
It's only the start

Constructive criticism is welcome...
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