#1
This is just a fun song to play, its mostly off the cuff, some feedback and suggestions will be appreciated. thnx

http://yoyo.dmusic.com/music/

its "newsong1" btw
"Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life.Get wasted all the time, and you'll have the time of your life!" ~ Billy Connolly
#4
yeah thnx for some feedback and yeah i do now notice the bass is quite loud. I think I need to tone it down a bit.
"Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life.Get wasted all the time, and you'll have the time of your life!" ~ Billy Connolly
#5
Thanks for the crit.

I agree about the bass, but that's an easy fix. The song overall sounds like a pretty good jam track, but the lead parts are pretty spaced out and random, but if combined, it could be turned into a decent solo. Though, if you were simply aiming for a recorded jam, then it came out nicely. Nothing sounded out of place really.
#6
Listening right now.

Some nice rock'n'roll ideas you've got there, I like the main riff and the solo part. Reminds me a fair bit of NIB by Black Sabbath! Good playing, sounds random at times, but you've got some serious chops :-D

The mix is quite weak. The bass muffles everything up, the lead guitar tone is lacking definition. The drums sound artificial and "on top" of everything.

Some tips on mixing (at least that's what I do):
- Compress and equalize the bass, I'd cut the mids a fair bit and boost the low and high end
- Use an other drum machine
- Keep the rhythm tone, it's awesome :-D
- remove some of the delay from the lead guitar and equalize it differently. (Less low end, more mids and high end)
- Compress the whole mix and add a tiny bit of reverb to it to make it blend.


Mind having a listen at mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=635887