#1
I actually wrote these songs quite some time ago but I found them again and I did some adjustments. Anyway theres 2 songs, one of them is an acoustic song (byzantine) in which I experimented with a few weirder scales, the second is a neo classical ish (song2) song with maybe a hint of power metal? (the names in brackets arent the titels just the file names).

Anyway I'd like some kind of advice on the songs, especially on the metal song, which i feel might be a bit jumpy. I like the parts but cant be sure if they go well together.

hope you like it, thx

EDIT: now theres the midi version as well
Attachments:
song2.zip
Last edited by AmIEvil? at Aug 10, 2007,
#2
may i just say

I JUST ****ING CREAMED MYSELF

well done dude!

10/10 really enjoyed the acoustic track
Don't take me too seriously.

Live Life
#3
man... this stuff you have here, its just... well...
AWSOME!!! 10/10!!!
i have totally nothing to say about it, just awsome, great work dude, nothing need to be changed.
i would like to hear more of your work.
btw, i liked the acoustic song better, even though im more into metal.

if you have an time, plz,
crit any of my songs in the sig...
crit my songs, (PLZ):
[thread="610914"]Num.2[/thread]
[thread="610914"]Num.3[/thread]
[thread="610914"]Num.4[/thread]
[thread="620776"]Num.9[/thread]
[thread="620776"]Num.10[/thread]
[thread="630441"]Num.11[/thread]
[thread="637838"]Num.12[/thread]
[thread="638436"]Num.13[/thread]
[thread="639309"]Num.14(UnFinshed)[/thread]
[thread="638439"]Num.15(UnFinshed)[/thread]
[thread="642193"]Num.17[/thread]
[thread="643556"]Num.18[/thread]
[thread="651276"]Num.19[/thread]
[thread="660867"]Out Of The Darkness[/thread]
[thread="661588"]Begining[/thread]
#4
Byzantine Acoustic: Around measure 58 I would add a little delay on the chords, maybe even have a backing guitar just for that part, to add more of a ringing feel to it. But holy fuck that was brilliant!

Song2: I want your babies. This piece is absolutely stunning. Nothing more needs to be said. That piece blew my mind.

You are godly. Record these, and I will worship you.
#5
thanks alot guys for the feedback! Wouldn't have guessed that you liked them so much
vinguler, sorry I can't crit any of your songs since I wasn't able to open them up, theres some sort of problem with gp. If you post them as audio as well I could..
#6
I dont know why the songs don't work.
anyways I cant make it audio, atleast i dont know how
without getting any kind of program-and i just cant get any.

anyways, again, awsome work with your songs,
and thanks for trying my songs.
crit my songs, (PLZ):
[thread="610914"]Num.2[/thread]
[thread="610914"]Num.3[/thread]
[thread="610914"]Num.4[/thread]
[thread="620776"]Num.9[/thread]
[thread="620776"]Num.10[/thread]
[thread="630441"]Num.11[/thread]
[thread="637838"]Num.12[/thread]
[thread="638436"]Num.13[/thread]
[thread="639309"]Num.14(UnFinshed)[/thread]
[thread="638439"]Num.15(UnFinshed)[/thread]
[thread="642193"]Num.17[/thread]
[thread="643556"]Num.18[/thread]
[thread="651276"]Num.19[/thread]
[thread="660867"]Out Of The Darkness[/thread]
[thread="661588"]Begining[/thread]
#7
do you think you could make it in powertab format?

or something so i could listen to them in windows media player?
#8
if you can tell me how to change it to media player then sure, but I don't know how And I do have power tab but thats slow work and I haven't really figured out all of it so thats kinda hard...

if someone could tell me how to change gp4 songs into mediaplayer that would be nice?
thanks

edit: figured out how already, the midi version is up one my first post guys!
Last edited by AmIEvil? at Aug 10, 2007,