#1
Okay heres the deal, my friend and I are writing our first song together. We hope you like it, crit4crit


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e|--------------------------------------------------------------- x4, Bass comes in 3rd time

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Then guitar and bass,

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Well, we hope it's good. Remember; our first song so it might not be that great. We don't have drums for it yet...were not even done with guitar and bass. So rate it please from 1-10.
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Matt Freeman>You
#2
3-5 sorry, but that doesn't sound really good to me, but if you just mod that little bit more it could be good.
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#3
ok well i was expecting that we just wrote it about an hour ago
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Matt Freeman>You
#5
instead of going to the 8th fret on the Astring, go to the 7th. that'll at least keep it in the key.
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#7
Quote by DougC84
instead of going to the 8th fret on the Astring, go to the 7th. that'll at least keep it in the key.


...damn thts what the guitarist said...
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Matt Freeman>You
#8
Quote by Tasman
Its pretty **** really...a little too simplistic


and you shut the f*ck up
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Matt Freeman>You
#9
he is giving you some feedback?! he said it was simplistic... he could have just said that its pretty **** really so cut him some slack!
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