#1
Alright so I made this song http://www.sendspace.com/file/2hj5bp because I realized after 3 years that I had to stop playing guitar music.. Why.. well I dont have a condenser mic and I've been recording my acoustic stuff all wrong.. after getting into AFX and Daft punk recently I decided to try my hands at a different genre for awhile..

I already know the quality of the song is good because its all midi..usually i use a drum sampler but i decided to use a synth on this to give it a more rough sound.. and used a fairly basic snyth for harmony

This song is repetitive.. so dont tell me that.. Just give me an honest opinion. Maybe where you would like to see it go instead of being just repetitive..

as always i'll crit your song..

Last thing yeah its on sendspace because (I've said it before) I'm nowhere a gooe enough musician to have to stop people from stealing my music... and i like my sound quality to be the the best
When the sun falls the moon rises...

My attempt at art lasted for an instant and then faded like a candle without oil...

When i get around to making more candles hopefully my art will return in a perfect form that all can appreciate.
#2
very cool. this is different, it gives kind of this cool vibe. i like this but it isnt enough, its need and overdriven guitar that comes in and plays a nice slow, emotional solo. some vocals would help it not be so repetitive. if u dont want to do guitar thro in a lil piano. theres a bunch of things u can do with this, just do what u like and what u think would sound good. but i like what ya got, keep it up, u got some good stuff to work around. crit mine, link is in my sig under recordings
My Music
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
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Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
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