You have a really good voice, and the lyrics are well written. The guitar sounds good, and the recording quality is great. If I had to say anything negative at all, it would be that the ending is really abrupt, but that's the only thing I'd be able to think of. Nice song.
sounds pretty nice man. vocals are good, guitar sounds good too, (i'd probably turn the electric up, or distort it slightly, just to give it a little bite to make the song more powerful during those parts. as it is the electric sounds a little flat. but still good). pretty standard pop lyrics, but not bad by any means, suits the song well. good work.

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some of the falsetto parts were a bit rough. But overall, it sounded good man. Better than most on here. Take a look at my new cover of a David Gray song if you would, it's in my sig.
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