let me know how it sounds and if it needs anything else and any ideas to change are welcomed...thx
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this needs to be longer and have more instruments going. you should at least add some bass and drums. you should change the bridge because its the same as the introduction. maybe even do a variation of the intro for the bridge. you should put some more work into this and try and at least finish a good bit of it because then you would be able to get more advice for when people crit it.

could you crit mines please?