#1
Yes that's right... another!!!

It's on my purevolume

Thanks in advance dudes! Your criticism is always helpful.

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The slow solo is on the neck pickup and all the rest of the song on the bridge.

Feel free to ask anything else you might wanna know =D

And i might bump this thread with vocals in a while. But i'll have to ask my ex-bandmate who's now living in spain. But keep an eye out, it could happen.
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#4
it sounds great

your second crazy train solo was really really good too
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#5
no vocals? Anyways it was good , some things on the solo could've been a LITTLE smoother but it was at least a 9/10 Good job
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#6
Quote by Hammett5
no vocals? Anyways it was good , some things on the solo could've been a LITTLE smoother but it was at least a 9/10 Good job


Second person to say that. It'll be done when I get to it. Could someone crit the tone by the way, that was a big thing for me in this one, I spent a lot of time on it.
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#7
i'm no pro about tone or anything, but i thought it was very good
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#8
nice playing and nice tone, maybe a tiny bit fuzzy though
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#9
bro i cant download the song as i have a dial up connection....can u plz enable the download link for the file.....thnx
#10
nice cover. i see u alternate pm the intro. overall it kickass

and if u want to, check out my four horsemen and fade to black covers. i did them 4 years ago so theyre not the best
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#11
Tone is sounds too mid-y? I guess not enough treble and it really does sound too fuzzy. Otherwise good playing, and keep up the good work.
#12
Your tone should be more trebley.

Without wanting to be overtly critical, since it was largely solid the whole way through, the solo was kinda sloppy.

Good work though, maybe rerecord the solo and mess around with equaliser settings and you could be able to make it sound a lot better.
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#14
well done bro....that was tight(really tight).......keep rocking.


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#15
Well done...

- But at the beginning..

00 7 00 6 00 5 0 4 0 3 0 2 1


The 7 , 6 , 5 etc. are not palm-muted.

- The solo needs more work.. slow it down before speeding it up


Please check out my MoP solo if you didn't have done it yet.

I was playing guitar for 10 months when I recorded the vid but I think the solo is pretty well done.

Let me hear your opinion:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=10231672#post10231672


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#16
i didn't notice you commented on mine, so i figuered i would go a liitle more indepth with my critique

what someone said above me , dont palm mute the 7,6, and 5 on the intro
tone was excellent, maybe a little more treb, but it might just be me (like just one or 1 1/2 up)
but KEEP the same tone on the harmony and first solo, they sounded amazing

solo was a bit sloppy, but hell, i couldn't do any better, so i cant really knock you on that
you were in perfect time with the original, i am pretty sure you could place james voice over this and it would be perfect

9/10, thanks again for crit. mine
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