#1
in the moments my sorrows outweigh my happiness
a soul is being dusted off and put back on the shelf
from my birth to my death
every moment is a speck of dust
my sorrows remind me of the moments when i was quiet
still and wondering how dusty it could get
how many memories made
in the moonlight, on a cold night in our sleeping bags on the deck by the water
staring at the sky and realizing what we really are in one catastrophic moment
like an illness it hits us that unlike the sky we gaze at
we will one day fizzle out like one of the shooting stars we see plumeting through the sky
its dusty trail following it like all of the memories we've ever gained
they too, greet the ground and become part of it
Last edited by tmbz at Aug 11, 2007,
#2
wow. this is actually pretty fantastic, in and of itself, but also in comparison to most of the stuff on UG

its dusty trail following it like all of the memories we've ever gained
they too, greet the ground and become part of it

beautiful


sadly though, someone is gunna report this thread. the name of the thread is sopposed to be the title


crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=611287