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ok this is the first song I've posted here so give me constructive criticism please.

It's called "Get outta here"

go away
Shut up and get out
I dont got a clue what
You're talking about

Theres a hut down south
It makes little sense
More than whats in your mouth
It costs two pence

Now get outta here
I already told you once
Aint gonna do it twice
Just leave this month

Get outta here
theres nothing for you
Get outta here
Or ill run you through
Get outta here
It would be wise to
Get outta here

You're in my face
I dont know why
This is whats happening
You can say goodbye

I'm not sure what to say
dunno who to tell
Get out
Go to hell !

leave right now
nothing for you here
pocket full of shells
go run like a deer

Get outta here
theres nothing for you
Get outta here
Or ill run you through
Get outta here
It would be wise to
Get outta here