#1
Hey.

little tune I wrote last week.
I chose the name because my friend said it sounded like the music he would rob a bank to.


any feedback would be appreciated.
Attachments:
John Dillinger.zip
ESP H-300 (EMG81/85)
Ibanez RG570
Ashton VP30
Dunlop Crybaby
Boss CE-5
Boss DS-2
Behringer EQ-700
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#2
sounds awsome. even thou not really my taste.
the solo is great, really nice and fast. really fits the whole song.
i had problem with bars 9-10, the b chord there didn't fit there, in my opinion.
the part with the bass lead is very nice, and oversall your bass fits very well.
the drums are also very cool, also fit the whole thing.
try ading some kind of vocals to it(grouls or screams), it'l be

overall, 9/10. very awsome work man.

be welcomed to crit whatever in my sig .
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