I've posted these both before ages ago but was curious for new feedback (plus I added in basslines with my friend's old bass). Both tracks are manipulated drum loops that came with my program with my guitar on top of it. They are not intended to be lead guitar wankfests (although those are fun) but rather structured songs meant to have vocals over them. Let me know what you think!

I'm going to be criting Our Once Proud Flag while listening the song....

The begining sounds alot like Incubus which isnt really a bad thing.

I like the solo, but It leaves me wanting a little more at the end. Good though

Plenty of room for Vocals,

Another good solo

I actually like this one better then the first solo

the guitars seem repeatative right now but I know that there is supposed to be VOX over it so that's completely fine.

Good Peaks

I love the Effects

nice outro solo

Overall great song, 9/10
listening to fire now...

like this intro riff.. yeah i mean.. it sounds good but like my music, it needs vocals.. so i'm with ya.. imagining it with vocals - i think it would really sound awesome.. you could still mix up some of the riffs though.. the solo is very cool.. but there could still be some modification.. rather its adding a nice bassline or varying that main guitar riff a bit.. but it sounds good as is so good work man

crit mine please.. (also no vocals) https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=649516