#1
Hey guys, we just finished up a new song. We havent produced or mixed it at all yet, but we gotta make sure we like how things are first, which means we also want to get all your suggestions and whatnot before we send it off to our producer (because at that point it becomes a big pain to change stuff).

SO we could really use any criticism, comments, suggestions etc! This is our first time kinda venturing off like this as far as style goes, its totally different from our usual stuff and its a bit of an experiment.

Link is in the sig, song is called ESong

Oh and our singer really wants to redo some of the vox on here before we send it off, which is why you may find some of it not up to par.
He came dancing across the water
Cortez, cortez
What a killer.
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#3
pretty rad work guys, i dig it. it's got a great rock and roll feel to it, with a definate southern feel. i dig it, it's not unoriginal, it's got it's own personality. though not usually the type of music i listen to, it's nice work.


crit mine, if you get the time or whatever-
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=652791
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#4
the recording quality wasn't great, the vocals seemed kinda "far" from the rest of the song but were sung very well, the drums were good, the lead part was well preformed, im not always into this kinda stuf but i can realy apreciate parts of the song

crit one of mine plz
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=652105

or directly on dmuic
http://stefanschonsheck.dmusic.com
#5
I like the tune and the style but I agree that your mix is killing it. Vocals are good but they are buried in the mix. I played with the track a bit with some mastering software and it did sound better. The track is missing some dynamics to my ears. Need some highs and mids.

If you have a chance can you crit this one...
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...ad.php?t=650960
#6
thanks all, I was in michigan seeing the allman brothers amongst various other things so i wasnt around to return the crits, but i will tommorow (im gonna take the rest of the day off heh)
He came dancing across the water
Cortez, cortez
What a killer.
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http://zoso.dmusic.com/ <--Check me out at