All right, this is the rough version of my song "I Was Never Good At Talking..."

It's kinda folk/indie which is cool and all, but I'm gonna add drums to this once I go to my friends house and use his drums, so it's all good

crit for crit

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Last edited by juniorfr3ak at Aug 19, 2007,
Not my kind of music but I do like the guitar. Thats just me...and as I said, I don't really KNOW that kind of music so I'm not sure if thats considered good... ?

I don't know where I'm going with this...

Vocals aren't bad either. I'd give it a thumbs up
The guitar that kicks in around :55 (chorus)? is very cool - I wish it was a little louder. I sort of wish the chorus melody was a little stronger. Both the vocals and guitar are pretty solid, and have a "I know how I want to write this song" feel to them, if you know what I mean, which you probably don't, but I find them a little seperated. The lyrics are nice and fitting, not too overdone.

I think you'd like Two Gallants - it's pretty much folk indie-progressive.

Overall, I'm interested to see where this song travels once you add to it.
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