this is a song that i wrote and that i am currently recording and i wanted to know what you guys think of it.
Last edited by pete42 at Aug 28, 2007,
I liked the triplet pizzacato strings during the verse, but maybe if you had less sixteenth fills, the triplet over two pattern would come out better. ^_^

The part before the chorus, two hectic measures, was almost the coolest part! ^_^

The Chorus is cool, just what i said about the triplet over two.

Overall it's pretty good, 8/10

Crit mine?
4/4 is just so boring. <_<
alot of it sounds really out of key with each instrument. go and check everything is in key and if it is then you have just made bad note choices cos some of that just sounded bad because of it.