I wrote the instrument parts in thirty minutes, and the first verse and chorus in another 25, corrections or comments about what I've written so far? suggestions for second verse? thanks

Goin' through life and i just dont get it
Takin it easy tryin' not to sweat it.
I try to be good.
I do what I'm told.
But now these problems begin to unfold.
And now as I finally see something new,
I try to throw it away but it sticks like glue.
I pushed it aside
And thats what I get
But right now it's way too hard to admit.

You've told me once,
You've told me twice
God, you've told me a million times.
I tried to forget it
And now I regret it.
My heart wants to go but I just wont let it
I've put that aside,
I'm ready to change
But am I willing to give up my past in exchange.
I just want to stop.
And put on the brakes.
And finally learn to give what it takes.
YAY! a Christian on UG!! woot!! but yea, i like that, hmm as for a second verse i have no idea, wait till God gives it to you
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sir, i would like to inform you that you are now my favorite UGer. Not only did you use the word y'all, which is native to my homeland, but you correctly punctuated it using the apostrophe.

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How about:

Sing Hallelujah *singing hallelujah*

... Wait they already have that.
And instead of waiting for god, do some research yourself ^^.

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Without the loss we can't go on
and with the loss we became strong.