#1
Two of my best friends asked me to write a song for them... so I spent about 30 minutes writing this. They loved it, I just want to see what everyone else thinks of it.

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Every person is a new door to a different world
We've found the perfect world and it's just ours
Friendship is one mind in two bodies
Together we are one, yeah, we are one

Through all the rainy days
And the long cold nights
Through the relationships
And pointless fights
One thing stays the same
You will forever ease my pain

Behind some doors were dead ends
We've all gone through stupid trends
But nothing can replace close friends
No, nothing, can replace those friends


Through all the rainy days
And the long cold nights
Through the relationships
And pointless fights
One thing stays the same
You will forever ease my pain
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#2
dude that crazy, you got a rift for it yet?
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That, or being absolutely broke - though you always find money for cigarettes, then end up even more broke.

so true ^.
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#3
Thanks. I made a simple little chord progression to go with it, nothing really special. E-A-B-A-Dsus2
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#4
I just want to say that the first stanza didn't flow to well with me... seemed to drag on a bit... I'm sure it works fine with the rhythem you have in mind(3rd stanza had great flow)... meh... whatever...
Promises meant a lot back then.
#5
It could do with being a bit longer, try adding some more stanzas. What you have there is good, I liked the chorus part -

'Through all the rainy days
And the long cold nights
Through the relationships
And pointless fights
One thing stays the same
You will forever ease my pain'

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Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#6
Thanks guys. And I'm not really satisfied with the first stanza, but I couldn't think of anything else.
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