My first song ever, give me some good help, it jst a beginning also.

I dream of you all day
How I might play

I dream of her all day
Wat am I sopposed to say?

THey make me think
They drive me crazy

I get up to get a drink
They make me act lazy

I want to get better
I don't no wat to do

I wanna ask her
It keeps my mind glued

Was it meant for me
or am i destined for the other
please listen to my plea

Ibanez GSA 60
Ibanez RG4EX1QM
Metal Muff
Jackson DKMGT
GK Backline 210
Vox VT50
Crate XT15R
Ibanez SR400QM
Ibanez GSR 200 bass
Crate B15 bass amp
Lots of Monster cords
i think it's a little too vague to be a good song, unless of course you're a phenomenal instrument player. Then, really who cares what the lyrics say ....
A Myspace introduction to:

It's not always rainbows and butterflies,
It's compromise that moves us along. -- Maroon 5