#1
this is unfinished and needs work its just that i couldnt see where to improve it so crits would be helpful.


I should be getting ready
any time know
and any time know
my day will run out

I am going to be late
I am going to be late
but do I care
but do I care

time is going by fast
faster than I
look at time go
I have nothing but smoke

I cant catch
whats know chasing me
which is darkened by
history

there goes time again
where do I stand
where do I stand

lost in a moment
when time flys by
everthing Is rushing
and I am going blind

disapearing into the darkness
watching everyone leaving me
becoming lost in another
part of history

forgotten before left
blind to perfect eyes
god is this a test
or am I being left behind