Its a good progression, and the arpeggiations are good, if occaisionally a tad too staircased, butit sounds as if you aren't quite comfortable switching betweent he chords yet and that causes a few of the awkward offsetting pauses.

The piece has a nice tension to it. I'd like to just hear it with a bit mroe fluidity. I like when it picks up at around 1:57.

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