#1
you come knocking at my window
wanna go for a walk
i was waiting on you
its been awhile since weve talked

walk on out down the stairs
youre already waiting there
you put your hand in mine
our knuckles comfortably align

cause there's nowhere else that i would rather be
than walking side by side with thee
yeah there's nowhere else that i would rather be

looking up at the stars
oh how far away they are
i look at you and smile cause
i know we couldnt get any closer

cause there's nowhere else that i would rather be
than walking side by side with thee
yeah there's nowhere else that i would rather be

crit if you want
#2
sounds like plain white ts' hey there delialah, it gets played way to much but man that's a really nice song, if i was a girl i think it'd be corny but really sweet.
#3
cause there's nowhere else that i would rather be
than walking side by side with thee
yeah there's nowhere else that i would rather be


trying a little too hard to rhyme...thee is pretty archaic...just go with you it's not that important to rhyme every line
#4
not mushy enough this is what i play to girls on the beach

Suffer to survive
Instinct I despise

Stalking the night, searching for
A victim to defile
**** she craves today
Cum she wants to spray
And to reach the orgasm through torture

From behind, pain shivering down my spine
I feel paralyzed only controlling my mind

Strapped to a table, naked, genitals exposed
Eyes claimed open, mouth
gagged shut, terrified
Locks my scrotum in a vice and
tightens forcefully
Agony, silent screams, want to die

Shackled and bound, unaware my fate
Destined to be maimed to stimulate

The skin is peeled off my dick
Done with a razor blade
She begins to suck
Blood and cum amok
She rips my **** off with her teeth
Masticate, gnawing and chewing the stump
She regurgitates, I'm covered in my bloody
chunks

Suffer to survive
Instinct I despise

I am alive, victimized
Tortured fate, asexual state