#2
you have lots of background noise and hum in your recordings, which i suppose is okay since none of the songs are full-on recordings of anything, but its something to think about. As a player i feel like you have good technique, but you can't really string your licks together smoothly. As a musician, i thikn you have some really good ideas here, and that maybe you should try turning a few riffs from "trippy" into an actual song. The beginning of it sounded really interesting and has potential. The last song you have on there is the same. If you attached another part to it to call a chorus, and then added words to it, it could be a good song.

crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=654418
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=656155