#1
sleep tight
its a simple mix
four parts war and two parts gin
I got a few loose ends that I gotta tie
before the nights out, before the nights out

sleep tight
its a chemical war
parapin / petroleum
You gotta make your choice between the few on the ground
and the ones in the sky, just waitin for the sun to come out

sleep tight
its simple a math
the soldiers in the dirt are relying on that
cuz if they dont wake up when they fall asleep
they gotta put all their clocks back, it could take hours

sleep tight
its the final hour
the weakest link in the chainmail armour
if all you do is pray for the end of the year,
its gonna kill you, its gonna kill you.

sleep tight
its a simple mix
four of them are real two are counterfeit
but if you try and see the difference you'll be shining the torches
on your own face, on your own face

[copyright-iamtheagent-2007]


This one is a bit of a protest song. C4C?
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#3
actually its more folk/indie. I suppose it can work in any genre, its just words isn't it.
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#5
well you can interpret it how you like, but ultimately its protesting war.
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#6
sleep tight
its a simple mix
four parts war and two parts gin
I got a few loose ends that I gotta tie
before the nights out, before the nights out

i like it alot, nice flow, seems dark and intriguing,

sleep tight
its a chemical war
parapin / petroleum
You gotta make your choice between the few on the ground
and the ones in the sky, just waitin for the sun to come out

i like it, nice work, it just sounds good lol and good meaning,

sleep tight
its simple a math
the soldiers in the dirt are relying on that
cuz if they dont wake up when they fall asleep
they gotta put all their clocks back, it could take hours

i like everything alot, except the last line, just changing it little, it seems odd in it place like you just threw it there, but other then that, awesome flow, loving it man,

sleep tight
its the final hour
the weakest link in the chainmail armour
if all you do is pray for the end of the year,
its gonna kill you, its gonna kill you.

again same as the rest, nice work!

sleep tight
its a simple mix
four of them are real two are counterfeit
but if you try and see the difference you'll be shining the torches
on your own face, on your own face

really good man liking it alot,

overall this was real good i think, nothing wrong with it except that one line i think, i like the meaning here, gives the reader bit of choice, so yea this was a great song man, Crit mine maybe? When the future gone.