#1
The Eye

Monochromatic cages
Keep us tame
Maybe its for the best
But somewhere
I know its not

Sadistic grin
Profound mind
Intelligent bully
Pathetic

As the mist clears
I still see beige
As the gun gets closer
I cant escape

A dark reality
Ruled by a deluded guide
In this tyranny
This unhealthy surveillance
Has demeaned the line

Sadistic grin
Profound mind
Intelligent bully
Pathetic

As the mist clears
I still see beige
As the gun gets closer
I cant escape

Mental genocide
Hysteric consequences
Its not for the best
Because somewhere
I know its not

As the mist clears
There is no beige
As the gun gets closer
I'm not afraid


First time writing lyrics (well properly)
"There are millions of people in the world, and none of those people are an extra. They're all leads in their own stories."
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Last edited by myself101 at Aug 30, 2007,
#2
There are a few lines which I think are too long and stop the lyrics from flowing right.

Monochromatic cages
Ruled by a deluded guide
This unhealthy surveillance
Hysteric consequences

Maybe you could try to alter that.

"As the mist clears
There is no beige
As the gun gets closer
I'm not afraid"
-favourite part