#1
Hey check out my new original i wrote !!! crit it,,, please tell me what you think!!i play all instruments and used this drum program from fruity loops! I know i need vocals and they will come !!! but here is a sneak of the rough mix!!! im using sonar 6 producers edition to record on!!!

GO HERE !!! MY PAGE!!http://www.myspace.com/theterrorxproject

THE NEW ONE IS Vigilance


ROCK ON !!!!


P.S. add me !

Terry
Last edited by thewizard67 at Aug 30, 2007,
#2
Pretty sick song man, killer solo and its all pretty good quality recording. check some of my vids if you want on YOUTUBE
#3
Man, this is bad ass. Quality seems good, I don't like the drums sound though. I really like the **** your doing with the harmonics. Sounds like a solid state amp, you could really use a nice tube amp for this though. I think it takes a little to long to get to the solo. The solo sounds really nice, has none of those really ****ty amateurish licks like a lot of the solos on here do. I really like this harmony thing your doing, really cool!

I think it should move on a little quicker, maybe vocals would help, or just a lead part (not a solo).

Overall, really cool. Could you check out my bands stuff real quick? I'd appreciate it.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=661019
Quote by greenday1182
i just heard the most amazing solo ever. it's in a song called "holiday" by green day. its even harder than some of blink 182s stuff!! im gonna learn this solo right now! give it a listen, its really good sounding and not too easy.
#4
nice riffs. nice harmonies. guitar tone could be a bit less fuzzy. maybe try miking your amp. did you go ahead and add vocals? the song that plays when i click on deliverence has vocals. if this is the right one, the vocals are absolutely awsome. solo is very cool. overall a nice song.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=661544
Too cool for a signature.