So I'm currently working on a song but I'm not sure where to go. My band is a huge mix of music but I'm not really sure where to go after the intro

the basic chords of the intro are

B 4 5 9 7
G 4 6 9 8
D 4 6 9 9
A 2 4 7 9

Those are the basic chords for the intro I don't really like the final chord

but I've tried these other chords for an experimental verse

B 9 5 3
G 9 6 4
D 11 7 5
A 11 7 5

This is a triple rythym song such as Hendrix song or Under The Bridge or Yellow Ledbetter
I really dig those ballads and I want to make my own
any suggestions?

Edit: can i get some feedback please?
Bump: please will somebody just give me some feedback?
And we will weave in and out of sanity unnoticed
Swirling in blissfully restless visions of all our bleary progress
Glowing in radiant madness
Last edited by TDKshorty at Aug 30, 2007,