#1
This is another alternative song by me... trying my hand in it for my girlfriends sake.

Just lemme know please

thanks
Attachments:
song4.zip
~~You are nothing. I am a God among men, creating the Universe before leaving you blinded and wandering.~~
Letters to Zaya
#2
Critting as I go...

The beggining is a little too power chordy. You should add some little lead guitar fills.

I like the drumming on bars 20-27.

The bridge was cool. Especailly when the drums kicked in.

For the bridge, you should DEFENITELY do some appregiated chords instead of just plain strumming. That would make it 100 times better.

Overall, good job. 9/10 in my book.

Pease crit my tune?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=662182
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