#1
not quite finished
Crit4crit


Revolution

(verse 1)
Adrenaline rushing through my veins
Through All this I'm the one to blame
I'm stuck in the gutter
screaming bloody murder
I'm on a hell-bound train
I guess I'm getting what I deserve
The court has been adjourned
But it's too late to stop
I'm on the top
Ahead of all the others

(Chorus)
It's time for a revolution
Go ahead call me insane
Going against regulations
I'll fight through the falling rain
It's time for a revolution
Come on now, fight with me
Going against regulations
We'll fight through the falling rain


not quite finished yet...
crit4Crit
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!


Last edited by popeye100 at Aug 31, 2007,
#2
Revolution

(verse 1)
Adrenaline rushing through my veins
Through All this I'm the one to blame
I'm stuck in the gutter
screaming bloody murder
I'm on a hell-bound train
I guess I'm getting what I deserve
The court has been adjourned
But it's too late to stop
I'm on the top
Ahead of all the others
that last line seems, and "screaming bloody murder" seems weird to me other than that its ok.

(Chorus)
It's time for a revolution
Go ahead call me insane
Going against regulations
I'll fight through the falling rain
It's time for a revolution
Come on now, fight with me
Going against regulations
We'll fight through the falling rain
again in this one the last line didnt rhyme with "me" but its still ok


so yea, seeing as u said ur not done yet im not gonna mention its short, its good u should finish it then put it back up


crit mine
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=661295
"The Word Is Out" thnx if u do
#3
^^Not all Lines have to rhyme^^
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!


#5
^^well thnx for the comment^^
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!