#1
this song is about someone I got to know alot, who I just recently got news she died on a plane crash going somewhere, and I just want to say RIP for her

UPDATE: 9/1/07 at 5:10 PM EST, I made the two verses and I am still working on the interlude, and thanks pianoman13 for the "but I wished I stopped you going from the start"

UPDATE: 9/1/07 at 7:36 EST, I finished the interlude which means I finished the whole song.

Why Was It You

Why was it you who had to go
I just wish I could fuc king know
now I miss you with all of my heart
but I wish I stopped you going from the start
now you gone and there is nothing I can do
I'll just wait till it's my turn and join you
but just want to know one thing though
why was it you who had to go

I think back to the good times we had
and I relize none of them are bad
cause we always had fun when we were together
and cause of that I'll remember you forever
your going to always be in my memory now
but I still wish I can find a way how
to bring you back into this world
because you were just another young girl

Why was it you who had to go
I just wish I could fuc king know
now I miss you with all of my heart
but I wish I stopped you going from the start
now you gone and there is nothing I can do
I'll just wait till it's my turn and join you
but just want to know one thing though
why was it you who had to go

I think back to how we met
and there isn't anything I regret
all the good memories that we had
just thinking about them makes me glad
but why the fu ck did you have to go
cause now I just miss you so
much that its tearing me apart
cause I did love you with all my heart

Why was it you who had to go
I just wish I could fuc king know
now I miss you with all of my heart
but I wish I stopped you going from the start
now you gone and there is nothing I can do
I'll just wait till it's my turn and join you
but just want to know one thing though
why was it you who had to go

I wish I could have changed your fate
but now it is to ****ing late
now your gone and there is nothing I can do
so rest in peace as I sing this song for you
I wish I could have changed your fate
but now it is to ****ing late
now your gone and there is nothing I can do
so rest in peace as I sing this song for you

Why was it you who had to go
I just wish I could fuc king know
now I miss you with all of my heart
but I wish I stopped you going from the start
now you gone and there is nothing I can do
I'll just wait till it's my turn and join you
but just want to know one thing though
why was it you who had to go
Why was it you who had to go
I just wish I could fuc king know
now I miss you with all of my heart
but I wish I stopped you going from the start
now you gone and there is nothing I can do
I'll just wait till it's my turn and join you
but just want to know one thing though
why was it you who had to go

and that is it, and I just want to say it one more time RIP
Last edited by eltyr18 at Sep 2, 2007,
#5
sounds awesome man, gunna b a great song

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#6
nice mate, like the sentiment you've got going here, just think that second line needs some work. Think i can see what you're doing - trying to show your anger at the situation, right? but, to me, it feels a bit immature and gratuitous. how about something like "Wish there was some way i could know"? - just a suggestion. also, feels like you've got one too many syllables in "but I wish I stopped you from going from the start" - maybe think about dropping the first "from"?

hope this helps a bit. looks like you could have a really good song here. good luck with it
#7
Quote by pianoman13
nice mate, like the sentiment you've got going here, just think that second line needs some work. Think i can see what you're doing - trying to show your anger at the situation, right? but, to me, it feels a bit immature and gratuitous. how about something like "Wish there was some way i could know"? - just a suggestion. also, feels like you've got one too many syllables in "but I wish I stopped you from going from the start" - maybe think about dropping the first "from"?

hope this helps a bit. looks like you could have a really good song here. good luck with it


thanks for the ideas, didn't think of it that way, so thanks.