#1
what if we slept through the dawn,
just to wake up to sunset, in a sense you're appalled
the shots you took of the daylight weren't nearly enough at all
looking straight at the warning signs, the stars, here i could tell you were wrong
not a place you can see, love, this world it was gone.
a hundred times over ago. it was a whiteout and everyone was still sleeping
to a nightmare that nobody was dreaming of.
because it hadn't happened to the night crowd.
as she looked at her feet and then back at his sunrise
she screamed at the moonlight 'just give me a sign'
'you're making me cry'
it shot her down, 'get back into line'
Last edited by Johnny_Walker at Sep 2, 2007,
#2
your thread got closed yesterday for a reason

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#3
I'll leave it open, just don't bump this and critique other people's work and they will return critiques.
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