#1
I havent wrote anything in more than a year then i sat down and had a idea. Its really rough as it only took about 10 mins to write. Never really been a great song writer but I thought I'd give it a go. Songs on my profile. Crit welcome, but dont think the song is many peoples cup of tea.

Thanx
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#3
Wow. This was a really amazing piece. With some work, it could be a hit. Very inspiring man, I loved the guitar, it reminded me of Robert Earl Keen(if that's the guy I'm thinking of). Yeah, just work on the vocals a little bit and you could have yourself a great song right there. Keep it up!

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