#1
I wrote this song for my ex-girlfriend. So yeah, it's a love song.
Please reply with constructive comments, as this is my first time writing a love song.

My Last Gift.

You and me, we used to be, happy together.
But I understand that you just can’t stand it anymore.
But one chance, and I’ll show you, who I am.
I’ll show you who I can be for you.

I can see, you with me, happy together.
Just let me prove what I can be for you, baby.
I would dance, with you tonight, and let you sleep,
On me whilst I hold you close to my heart.

If there’s a way, to make you stay,
If there’s a way, to make me change,
If there’s a way, to make me be,
With you everyday,
Tell me girl, and I’ll do it for you.

You’re beautiful, believe me girl, you are,
I was lucky enough to have you once as it is.
One more time, I’d like to hear, your heartbeat,
Entwined with mine, dancing to our rhythm.

Was I to you, what you were, to me?
Was I everything to you?
You were to me, what I wasn’t for you, so it seems.
Was I anything to you?

If there’s a way, to make you stay,
If there’s a way, to make me change,
If there’s a way, to make me be,
With you everyday,
Tell me girl, and I’ll do it for you.

I wanted to spend every minute with you,
I wanted to spend every smile with you,
I wanted to spend the evening laughing with you.
I wanted to spend my life with you.

I know it sounds bad,
But girl you drive me wild with that wicked smile.
I look into those eyes,
And my cure is your beauty so pure.
I smell your hair,
It’s the scent of an Angel; yeah that’s what I meant.
I hold you close,
And the bliss of your kiss I reminisce.

Until the day I forget;
Which will never exist.
Until the day I forget;
Which will never exist.
Until the day I forget…

If there’s a way, to make you stay,
If there’s a way, to make me change,
If there’s a way, to make me be,
With you everyday,
Tell me girl, and I’ll do it for you.

If there’s a way, to make you stay,
If there’s a way, to make me change,
If there’s a way, to make me be,
With you everyday,
Tell me girl, and I’ll do it for you.

You meant everything to me.
Thank you for making me,
This happy, girl.
You mean everything to me.



For Samantha Jane Guess



Thanks in advance for your replies.
#2
did she break up with you for being too clingy?


if not, then yeah i guess i would give this to her but it might just be better to say it than do the whole poem thing. idk.
#3
wow dude. wow. i like it alot....but wow is all i'm getting right now.
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