#1
This is a very early and rough recording of a recently written song. It's pretty short right now, but eventually the bridge will be fleshed out more and I'll probably add some instrumental parts at the end of each chorus. It's also going to have drums/bass and probably a piano or synth part, but as I said, it's an early recording. Please feel free to suggest ways to improve.

http://media.putfile.com/Birds-31
#2
lower guitar output, i can barely hear you, add just a tad of reverb to vox and guitar i think, just enough to wet it, not to where you know its reverb, just barely you know lol, but i like it , it sounds jazzy in a way, nice job