#1
this is my first lyric, and my gramma is not the best, (i`m a dane) but i wan`t to hear where i can improve my skills and what you think and so on,, please help,,

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For every step I take closer to you
You are getting further away
Feels like fighting for eternity

For every step I take
My heart is beating harder
My dreams getting more warm

But you are still so far away
And I miss your smile
If just you could start walking to
We could meet soon

For every dream I dream
I am getting more concerned
Will I ever see you again?

But you are still so far away
And I miss your smile
If just you could start walking to
We could meet soon

Please tell me,
Can we meet?
Give us a chance
I want to
Do you?
#2
lol "I want to do you"

erm, most of this has been said time and time again.

but time and time again it sells, so w/ever.

what kind of genre is this meant to appeal to?
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#4
(With minor edits)
For every step I take closer to you
You are getting further away
Feels like I'm fighting for eternity

For every step I take
My heart is beating harder
My dreams getting warmer

But you are still so far away
And I miss your smile
If I could just start walking to you
We could meet soon

For every dream I dream
I am getting more concerned
Will I ever see you again?

But you are still so far away
And I miss your smile
If I could just start walking to you
We could meet soon

Please tell me,
Can we meet?
Give us a chance
I want to do you hard and fast?
#5
haha, I don't think that

'I want to
do you'

translates to

'I want to do you hard and fast'

I think there's just meant to be a comma.

gold.
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