#1
So here's a song I wrote... I didn't know if it was any good though so if you have any thoughts on it it would be appreciated. Just be honest, i don't mind criticism unless you're doing it just to be a retard.

Undecided

Verse 1:
Can you help this boy, lift up his spirits?
There’s only one disposition, he doesn’t want to hear it
Love it or leave it, it’s just the motto that he lives by
Just wasn’t appealing, but it’s always in the back of his mind

Chorus:
He needs to know,
he’s always thinking of you
but he never gets the courage to
Show himself
he always thought he could wait
but soon it’ll be too late
Careful what you wish for (Careful what you’re wishin’ for)

Verse 2:
Can you see his pain? Searching for comfort
Now he can’t tell where to begin, he doesn’t want to be hurt
Love it or leave it, it’s just the motto that he lives by
Just wasn’t appealing, but it’s always in the back of his mind

Bridge:
Why can’t he sweep it
Under the carpet
Cause you know it means so much to him
#2
*reported*


Take it to S&L!!!!!
Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way