Same thing with this one... my second post, just a song and i wanted some feedback on whether its any good or not. So honesty is cool.

Keep Repeating

Verse 1:
We shoot to kill
And we’ll take no prisoners
I hope you know that you’re pissing in the wind
We might have been
But mostly never were
You should know that we’re beyond our suffering

Learn to take what you dish out (You’ll learn a graceful fall with practice)
Here’s a taste of your own medicine (Repetition is your friend)

Verse 2:
We give it all
And get nothing in return
Your attitude dims my awareness
Light the match
Toss it and watch it burn
I’m against the forgivingness

I can feel my numb hands
Thawing out with predictable chance
Songs and Lyrics forum por favor...this is the second time you post your songs in this forum
Schecter C-1 Artist
Vox AD15VT
Epiphone EJ-200 Acoustic

Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way