#1
Same thing with this one... my second post, just a song and i wanted some feedback on whether its any good or not. So honesty is cool.

Keep Repeating

Verse 1:
We shoot to kill
And we’ll take no prisoners
I hope you know that you’re pissing in the wind
We might have been
But mostly never were
You should know that we’re beyond our suffering

Chorus:
Learn to take what you dish out (You’ll learn a graceful fall with practice)
Here’s a taste of your own medicine (Repetition is your friend)

Verse 2:
We give it all
And get nothing in return
Your attitude dims my awareness
Light the match
Toss it and watch it burn
I’m against the forgivingness

Bridge:
I can feel my numb hands
Thawing out with predictable chance
#2
Songs and Lyrics forum por favor...this is the second time you post your songs in this forum
Gear
Schecter C-1 Artist
Vox AD15VT
Epiphone EJ-200 Acoustic
#3
*reported*


S&l!!!!!!!
Ticking away the moments that make up a dull day
You fritter and waste the hours in an offhand way
Kicking around on a piece of ground in your home town
Waiting for someone or something to show you the way