#1
I need help on this line for me it didn't go well with the tone of my song.
The line is basically "Rapture isnt coming" Over and Over, to give it a strong vibe. But I want it to sound better. Basically I need a nice powerful line that would mean "Happiness won't(isn't) coming."

I've come up with some stuff, but nothing I really liked. I want to know what you guys can think of since I have a small block of though there. Shoot away.
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#4
I like "The rapture is coming" but I don't think somebody else should write it for you.
And even, they like different words than you do.

If I say: Eternity isn't coming, I mean it as "happiness" but would you use that word?
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#5
This isn't the place to ask for others help in writing the piece directly.
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