I need help on this line for me it didn't go well with the tone of my song.
The line is basically "Rapture isnt coming" Over and Over, to give it a strong vibe. But I want it to sound better. Basically I need a nice powerful line that would mean "Happiness won't(isn't) coming."

I've come up with some stuff, but nothing I really liked. I want to know what you guys can think of since I have a small block of though there. Shoot away.
My signature is like a black spiraling abyss of uselessness.
I like "The rapture is coming" but I don't think somebody else should write it for you.
And even, they like different words than you do.

If I say: Eternity isn't coming, I mean it as "happiness" but would you use that word?
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"WHY DON'T YOU JUST F*CK OFF?!" So I ran up to her face and went "FINE, I F*CKING WILL" and stuck my hands down my pants and started masturbating. My friends were pissing themselves laughing while she just went "JESUS CHRIST"
This isn't the place to ask for others help in writing the piece directly.
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