#1
Yeah me and my band recorded this demo a little while back. We just recorded it to have something to let people listen to.

www.myspace.com/onlykneedeepband

Constructive criticism welcome and appreciated =)

thanks!


Oh and im the lead guitarist/backup vocals for this song
Last edited by onlykneedeepbs at Sep 5, 2007,
#3
i really like the intro
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#4
The music was pretty good but the singer didn't sound too god to me. Kind of nasally. Whoever was backing has a better voice. You are a lot better than a lot of bands I've seen on here like this though.
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#5
The music sounded good, singer wasn't my favorite... kind of reminds me of a7x mixed with trivium... sorry if thats not what you were going for
#6
The singing could do with a little work, but I think it could have some potential. A nice intro too, not a bad piece of music. I agree with Pen ^^ Backing vocalist would do a better job.
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#7
only thing that was not good in my opinion was the singing, you need a singer that has a fuller (and a little bit more heavy) voice (and can sing in tone)


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#8
the chorus was great! i really liked it but the keyboards....well....well......
the backgroundsinger sounded better than the actuall singer but you guys still rock!

crit mine maybe? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=623491
#10
I liked the intro. Vocals need to be up, and the singer just needs to put a lot more into it, feels really week. Keyboards get a little old, it would be cool to hear him play the same parts as as guitarist, or maybe some kinda of counter-point.

You guys definitely have something, keep working with it.
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