you should play with a backing track. it helps the tempo a lot. you go kind of quick in some parts. its hard to hear your voice too. i like your flanger

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um, you might want to rethink the high pitched vocals, i think theres some sign of decentness in them though
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lmao, really sorry yea ur right, it sounds better now lol

in that case its not bad yea

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Play intro few times really slow and you'll play it flawless. Seriously, it takes 5 minutes of practice, try it. I like how's the verse and chorus is played - except that "silence" (or breakdown, I dunno how to say that :/) part between verse and chorus. It longer, and it sounds better when it's long as in original. Not much on vocals, I liked them. If they were receorded on other mic they would be propably more plain.
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