#1
hey i jus started writing a song but it seems rubbish! can any one help me adjust and/or help me finish it??
it is average speed! with chords B D and A lyrics are: i wrote this in bout ten minutes as my friends funeral was today so decided to write a song

B
#everytime i would feel the same,when everynight i hear that name
D
#but i cant...(A)release that pain!

B
#i hear them songs on the radio,theyre real and going on below
D
#But i cant...(A) release the pain


please help me! any suggestion can u please email to stuartrobbocop@hotmail.co.uk