#1
i wrote this song for my girlfriend 3 months ago, but i haven't been brave enough to show it to her, not because i'm shy or anything, it's just that i feel like it's not good enough to be shown, but, i want to make sure if i'm right or i'm just a pessimist guy

song title is 29, it's in my ug profile
#2
u have great tone. i loved how mixed both guitar. great acoustic work, some mistakes but still sounds great. the vocals r quite good, very soothing. the solo towards the end was amazing, went with the song well. keep it up, some great work here.
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GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
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Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
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#4
Hey mi amigo mexicano te voy a devolver la critica. gracias por escuchar mi cover de stratovarius!! Y lo hare en ingles para que estos gringos burros entiendan...
Ok,
The tone is very sweet and the little riff is tasty, your vocals are good and even if they are kind of nasally i think they fit the song, the little solo was pretty good too, overall a good simple song, just sing it to your girl!
#5
yeah, i know my voice sound really nasally, i just can't avoid it, i have some problems with my nose, that might be the reason, i'll re-record the song, with better lyrics (the current one is pretty much...pointless)
#6
Crit mine if I crit yours?
I suggest you make this an instrumental song, because I loved your playing and your tone is indeed fantastic, but your voice is just not good.. Sry but as I said, I loved the guitar part so try to improve this, make a melody out of it instead of accompanying your voice.. And play this to your GF and you win

Cheers!
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#7
I love the progression, its like the perfect note choices. The vocals...eh. There very low, but there not impressin me too much. Lovin the leads that are coming in now. They follow the whole tone of the song perfectly. I wouldnt make this an instrumental song, but the vocals need some work. But good stuff man, im sure your gf would think its sweet that you even attempted to write a song for her.

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#8
Quote by Rustinpeace21
I love the progression, its like the perfect note choices. The vocals...eh. There very low, but there not impressin me too much. Lovin the leads that are coming in now. They follow the whole tone of the song perfectly. I wouldnt make this an instrumental song, but the vocals need some work. But good stuff man, im sure your gf would think its sweet that you even attempted to write a song for her.

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yeah, i've been seriously thinking into making it an instrumental or inviting someone else to do the singing cause i seriously suck at it

still, i'm going to give a try to the singing with new lyrics