#1
|---------------15--19--15
|-----------17---------------17
|-------16----------------------16
|---17------------------------------17
|19------------------------------------19
|

|----------------12--15--12
|------------13--------------13
|--------12---------------------12
|----14-----------------------------14
|15-------------------------------------15
|

|-----------------------12--15--12
|------------------12----------------15
|--------------12------------------------12
|----------14--------------------------------14
|10--14-----------------------------------------14
|

|19-15---------------------------------------15-19
|--------15-------------------------------15
|------------16-----------------------16
|----------------17---------------17
|--------------------17--14--17
|

|-----------------11--14--11
|-------------12---------------12
|---------11-----------------------11
|----13--------------------------------13
|14----------------------------------------14
|

the sequence isnt in this exact order and im not sure what kind of arpeggio the 4th one is and thats the one im doubting i always have some diminished ones im using but those fit fine.
if it doesnt then give me some advice on what i should change in it
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#2
sounds fine

but keep them all the same pattern

change up that 4th one
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#3
Write them out in the exact order in PowerTab or Guitar Pro, and listen to how they sound.
#4
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Write them out in the exact order in PowerTab or Guitar Pro, and listen to how they sound.


i did that but it still sounded a bit iffy without a chord progression behind it. i want it to change themes or mood which is why just hearing the lead makes it kinda hard to hear it as a whole.
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#5
however listening to it in guitar pro

yeah get rid of that 10 in the 3rd
then they flow nicely
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#6
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however listening to it in guitar pro

yeah get rid of that 10 in the 3rd
then they flow nicely


that 10th is the b3rd, so it fits, doesnt need to be taken out if wanted in
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