#1
Okay, this is my first *real* song to finish all the way through and actually put some effort into, and I want you guy's opinion on the SONG, not my playing, because I am camera shy. And it looks a little weird, the classical style song on an RR3, but my Les Paul was out of commission so I apologize for that.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=y_y_HoQP7LY

Much appreciated.

P.S, critique would be nice. You telling me how bad I suck wouldn't be : (.
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#2
i like the effect in the beginning. sounds pretty good, written very well, sound very smooth. nice tapping, some mistakes but still sounds good. need to build more around it. but so far pretty good keep it up.
could u crit mine,
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=666748
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