#1
Well heres yet another attempt at a song all i have is the first guitar and thats still not finished but heres a basic concept.

Update: drums added
Attachments:
Attempt.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
Last edited by kylendm at Sep 9, 2007,
#2
That was ok. You NEED to speed that thing up though. It's too sluggish, and it gets kind of boring. the riffs, are good they're just too slow. I turned the song up to 200 bpm, and it sounded way better. Turn that second riff up to 200 too.

You could also improve it by adding some more leads to spice up the power chord progressions.

This song defenitely has potential. Finish it up, and it could be a lot better.

Could you crit the second one in my sig plz? Thanks
I'm a person.
#4
^ You could say it was bad but just saying it all sucked isn't really good constructive criticism =/.
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#5
Well i added some drums to it so it would have a fuller effect for listeners. But who ever is gonna play these drums is gonna be exhausted with full kick drums through basically.
Attachments:
A3.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#6
i find it a little boring with the same power chords over and over again. you should try and spice it up a bit. Also i thing that bars 10-12 you should turn into an acoustic part. It needs some work but it could be pretty cool. good luck.