#1
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=748070

It's not perfect, but feedback would be appreciated anyway.

I think one of the guitars was too loud in contrast to the other guitar, but oh well, I could always get that fixed later.

Also, I don't care for the solo at all. The sweeps sound way too sloppy, and I wouldn't mind just doing that whole solo over again.
Last edited by Petrucci Jr. at Sep 12, 2007,
#2
i think th harmonized guitar part would be better if it went into an actual harmonized solo
#3
I agree a harmonnised solo following the harmonised section would be better. Also I think the tones could do with some retouching, it would improve it a lot. Also the little guitar section that appears at ":42 I think it was feels as thought its beenediting in there later....Overall I thin kteh song has some great potential just a few little nuances.

If you have hte time please Crit mine cheers

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=667109