Down in the gloom, of the oceanside bay,
Is where the demons themselves come up to pray
In the midst of the fire, where there's passion and love
Down, comes God from the heavens, hands covered in blood
screaming and crying, those humans run
For hell on earth has emerged from the sun
Death may feel close, but he's so far away
for death himself has been killed in the fray
Birdie Birdie in the sky, why'd you do that in my eye? Looks like Sugar, Tastes like sap.....OMG ITS BIRDIE CRAP!
Thread Titles.
Two things and two things only should be in your thread title; the name of your piece, and a genre, where applicable. No other symbols or attention seeking devices are permitted - This includes capitalisation too. Your thread will just be closed if you do. Do not beg for a critique or say ‘C4C’ (Crit for Crit) either, or it will be closed. Smileys also are not permitted. HTML does not work in titles either, don’t try it, it will be closed. If you can't think of a title, 'Untitled' will suffice.
In addition to this you can put "unfinished" alongside your title, for any work that is incomplete, I stress just "unfinished". The only other permitted extras in your title is O.T.S. (On the spot).

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Pretty lame lyrics...sorry but its true

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