#1
Hunt of the Wolf

Running!
Through barren fields
Hunter shall catch you soon
Flee now!
For time is short
Your life depends on your speed
Can you escape?
The stars say no
But youve lost faith, can you trust the sky?
Watch your back!
He approaches now
He bleeds his victims dry

Thoughts!
Race through your mind
What happens when you die?
Fear!
Beckons you
Your screams echo through the night
Blood!
Splatters on you
Your, or is it his?
Death!
Awaken now
One more corpse for the crows


This is a thrash metal song inspired by Evile and the first Metallica album. Thoughts?
#2
hey, pretty nice! i particularly liked the second half of the first verse/thing.
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#3
*Try singing this to Slayer's Angel of Death. I think it works quite well.
#4
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*Try singing this to Slayer's Angel of Death. I think it works quite well.



Heh-heh, well Slayers my favorite band and Angel of Death got me into metal. I guess that influence might seep out

Thanks for the input everybody, this is the first time my lyrics have been commented on by other people
#5
At first I thought this was bad, but once I saw the genre and went through it again finally made sense.
youve is actually you've not important, but a mistake nonetheless.
Also, I would change "Your screams echo through the night" to your scream echoes through the night; not much of a differance, but I think it flows better.
And I really like the "One more corpse for the crows" line

Overall 7/10
Could be better, but good attempt
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