So I went thru a break up and for my english home work we had to write a poem, so I picked a personal experience and decided to write on it!

this is my first time ever writing one so its prolly crap! But anyway!

As I said my last goodbyes
I thought you were the one
That day I first Saw you
So happy, so sad,

You were the first one
To never looked Down
And I thought forever mine,

But as I watched in
I saw all that was nothing to me
But that of what I wanted to See.

ok for a first poem?
A poem needs neither. I hardly ever use rhyme schemes in my poems, only a few rhymes every now and again. I ignore meter completely, I prefer breaking lines when it seems appropriate. Also

*reported* Rules on titles, give em the once over and you'll be great.