#1
guys i need help im writng a song and i have lots of verses i like but i have four that bassiclly are horrible......so could you guys help me choose? if you need help understanding what i ment just ask? Thanks

choose verse 1#
Embrace the truth
for it will win
liars lose
for it is sin


choose verse 2#
Made of leather
hard to rip
count each day
before i end this sh*t

choose verse 3#
Strum the strings
of everything
paper wings
angels sting


choose verse 4#
Blackened angels
lost for good
foot to throat
your death note
untr00
#2
3 and 4 are good, but I don't like 1 or 2 as much

especially #4, 'foot to throat' is a great line
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#4
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are you joking?
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