#1
I see you here
Watching me
I fight back tears
And say, “Oh dear,
I did not recognize
Your disguise”

The very next morning
You temp me with
Not only words
But with beauty
Your arms come around me
My heart is beating

You leave once more
To a different land
Separated by water.
I want you back.

So I sent the message to a whale
In hope that it would sail
Across the seas and on to you
My greatest fear?
It became true.


C4C, just a short poem.
#2
Well...I cant realy see the message in it, and it doesn't realy have much flow...cant realy put my finger on anything to correct except the last line, I would have put "came", instead of "became"...but thats just me.